All Comments on 'A Debt Left Unpaid Ch. 02'

okay, so you're gay and the mobster is a moron...

Wow,what happens now?Is Vito going to find out his henchman getting a forced blow job?It sounds like steph is enjoying herself(maybe alittle to much)maybe its what she needs.Please say we are going to find out soon.I can't wait for him to find out her little secret and what his reaction will be.Very Nicely Done

This was a nice addition to the story. (And I do hope it continues!) I did notice one typo at the end, and one little thing that bothered me was being able to take anal sex without lube. ;) It's a small detail I would have written in.

But otherwise this was a nice, hot submission! I eagerly await more!

Cant wait to hear what else happens, please write more it is such a sexy story.

I absolutely LOVE this story!!! But I want to see the end or at least the next chapter!!!! Please come back and finish this story!!! It has been such an erotic journey!!!!!

Vito said to Steph "I do not appreciate liars, deadbeats, and people of that nature."

She will be in a great deal of trouble and danger now that she has not told Vito about what she is. Vito would deal with Sarah for being dishonest with him.

This whole series was going great until the introduction of Vito and the debt angle. I would have loved the story more if Steph and Sarah linked up, She made him into the being He became. Best of Both Worlds, a She male with a dick. As the next sequal to this story plot goes, as stated about hating liars and deceivers, Steph would end up dead and so would Sarah. If I were to rewrite this series, I would have ended it on a positive note with just Sarah and Steph. Want of a better twist, Steph is actually a millionaire with connections and Vito is one of 'em.

I liked this story very much. It was exciting leading up to them fucking. I love anal stimulation

what right did sarah have to give her to vito

Please continue .. I need to know what happens to Steff