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by RossDaniels

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AmyfriendAmyfriendabout 17 years ago
Oh my what a sweet...

poem that promises an upcoming lovemaking session. Nicely done.

MichelinBMichelinBabout 17 years ago
Loved it!

I would have loved to be the inspiration for that delicious piece!

Great job!

nz_marienz_marieabout 17 years ago
wonderful

Very good, I especially love the 2nd to last paragraph, that could be a poem on its own, kudos to you Ross :)

Southerncharm48Southerncharm48almost 13 years ago
Touched me

This is the best and touched me so much. Brings out a personal experience for me. I love this,Love it, Love it.

LolitaXXXLolitaXXXalmost 13 years ago
You are unbelievable!

Wow! MMMMMMMM...so much passion, so beautiful! I do believe that you could talk me right out of my panties on the coldest day of the year...giggle!

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