All Comments on 'A Walk On The Beach'

A little different from the usual boring NC/R story.

Nice twist at the end....

You're writing just gets better, Lynn. Can't wait to see more.

You write, I'll read. Every story is great.

Please keep writing.

Calling you Mistress seems way too formal.

I can see a sequel to this ... you have put in place a foundation for a great story that could go any direction.

Good story.

Regards, Jack

Really very well written!...Never realised I could be so turned on with a story like this!!..Best regards,

Donseksi

Interesting but I have been told that most women that have been raped got no enjoyment what-so-ever out of it. For stroking, your's has a much more satisfying Flavor.

Wonder if I've been told the truth?

I agree with Jack. Mistress much to formal. We'll call you Miss-Lynn. The last commentor had a valid point. Most rape victims on just that, victims.

I do think the story had some flair and I enjoyed it. The more you write the better it gets. Keep up the good work.

DG Hear

in the conclusion. A step up from the run-of-the-mill Non-Consent story. Well done, Lynn.

Very well written. Pulled me into the plight of the victim as well the guilt of enjoyment afterwards. Very well done indeed. All I want to know is... does she & Mr. Winston III hook up again?

Very enjoyable. Passionate, yet still able to be considered a well-written story because of the nice twist at the end. Good job!

Miss-Lynn...You've done it again! I was so caught up in this one! I was able to feel and see what was going on! You are able to allow the reader to do this! But as one of the other readers said "Is there a sequel?" I feel there is! And has got to be!!! Please!!! Love ya, Princesslamala....hehehe

That was just awesome. Don't know what else to say. So on key, dragged me right in. Glad I decided to take a peek at your work! :D

Very well written . It litterally took my breath away.

But not a good storyline to me.