All Comments on 'I Hate My Brother Ch. 01'

Amy, That story was frigging hottt!! There is always sexual tension between siblings and that story covered alot of it. Love, hate, lust. Damn I know how you feel, I had an older sister that never went that far but whooo baby, almost could have.

Very good, Amy, and welcome to Literotica. You certainly do have a talent for writing. Keep writing with this or other stories.

Huge cock(GREAT) Hot Sis(Great) If sis is hot Mom must be a knockout!!! How about it Hot Mom(Heels -Stockings) and huge 12inch son--Explosive combo. Just dont make it lovelly-dovee. They both know what they want. That ill make it really sexy. I read this story 5x's a week called "Naughty High Class Mom Pt.2" Its the hottest story ever. Hot Mom with huge cocked Son. you gotta check - it-out

But don't destroy your story with an outrageously large cock. Keep it real, it's much more erotic that way!!!

Anyway, keep up the good work. I hope to see a lot of good hot stories from you sweety!!!

This Story Is SO HOT.............

Great story I hate my brother ch1.

would love a second part to this one so well written

fantastic story

i loved the story! very hot i haven't read something that good on this or any other site on the internet. keep up writing. brother and sister sex is hot but don't think that a monster cock is needed to make a good story.

Great. I can relate to it because my brother also is well endowed and he fucked me for the first time when I was about 16 and gave me my first orgasm. It was so enjoyable I fucked him quite a few times thereafter.

loved the story....but i would have preferred it if he blasted his cum in her pussy while tweaking her nipples and shouting expletives at her.. but its just me!!!

i wanna fuck you girl

that was kinda funny but yet at the same time was very hawt mad eme cum a few times just the thought of two ppl likeing it playong the rle of i hate u was diffrent but sexy for some reason,p.s would be nice if a second story did happen to be continued

how large are those tits

Your story make me sad, horny , love someone's pussy's as hell!

I just found your story out of the blue and I love it! I just focus of the part that how horny you are! I wish I could have you next to me, becaus my dick is thick as hell !!

Every moment whenever I think about some girls or watch some porn!!

You really need an editor or have someone else look it over first because you have some grammar and typing errors. Your descriptions are also flat. Reminds me of the writing on Wattapad.