All Comments on 'The Price of a Lie'

line as well as these: "Another crack appears in my heart

Yet another trail of blood

Slowly drips down mixing in the mud" You made the imagery work and presented a scene very clearly. My only crit: some of the rhyming might have worked against the poetic flow you established, I'd look at the over scheme of feet and rethink a few lines maybe. Very enjoyable overall <3