All Comments on 'A Taste For Blood'

by TE999

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Unbridled_PassionUnbridled_Passionabout 17 years ago
funny!

I thought the worst for a minute or two, but the ending was cute and unexpected- nice story!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
If you go out in the woods today ...

... you're sure of a big surprise! This one caught me by surprise and I loved it. Nice build of suspense to a classic TE climax. Great story!

My Erotic TrailMy Erotic Trailabout 17 years ago
chuckleboned

"Northern Short-Tailed Shrew" he he he... perhaps it was attracted by 'toe-jam' ... cute, erotic and filled with chucklebones (grin) (~_~) good luck and happy earth day!!!

glynndahglynndahabout 17 years ago
Yikes! Blood thirsty critters!

I was a little worried. I didn't look at the category and had no idea what a Blahblahrina was. Cute story!

cafwencafwenabout 17 years ago
Hysterical

The way you built up the fear of this little creature was amazing. I kep thinking 'What the hell is the damn thing' and how it wasn't going to be very romantic for the two lovers to get torn to shreds by some terrible beast. Really fantastic idea. Awesome.

rachlourachlouabout 17 years ago
You had me

I thought (without looking) I was reading one of your Erotic Horror's and the ending completely threw me! Very funny! Well done and good luck :)

Alessia BrioAlessia Brioabout 17 years ago
Very shrew'd!

I kept glancing at the category thinking there'd been some mistake. Nicely done!

Foxee BrowneFoxee Browneabout 17 years ago
Thanx

for the nice words, compliments are always welcome. Speaking of compliments, I still love this story, the ending is unexpected. Gr8 job darlin.

Rumple ForeskinRumple Foreskinabout 17 years ago
Fine work, TE

Good luck in the contest.

CeriseNoireCeriseNoireabout 17 years ago
Hahahahah

Too funny. Interesting visual images, and loved the twist ending.

DarkniciadDarkniciadalmost 17 years ago
Excellent

This is what satire is about *laugh* Well done, and good luck in the contest!

Selena_KittSelena_Kittalmost 17 years ago
OMG NO FAIR!

I know I'm gullible, but you TOTALLY got me!!! :PPP That's what I get for not looking at the category! ROFL

GREAT ending! :))

Selena

damppantiesdamppantiesalmost 17 years ago
Ouch!!

That must've hurt! But I'm chuckling... so it's all good. Very clever story, TE.

VyresOfTheArtVyresOfTheArtover 10 years ago

Lmao, I totally didn't expect that! xD niceee

TruckerChickTruckerChickover 10 years ago
:D

I just couldn't help but giggle.

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