All Comments on 'What Is My Daughter Doing? Ch. 03'

Purely science fiction . If you can't make your story realistic , you'd be better off not sharing it .

Fits in perfectly with the first two parts. To be married and have a wife/daughter combination like that. WOW. Don't listen to the first poster...nothing wrong with fantasy, that is what makes a story fun, escaping the real world for a short period of time.

I see a previous "commentor" expects a pulitzer entry!

Fantastic wank to this gangbang/lesbian incest story. Moved at a great pace too.

I would like to see how you would develop it now that the husband has two sexually submissive sluts at his calling. How dirty does he want to go?

humilation/animal/the old couple next door?

What I am saying is, don't leave it with the end - go for chapter 4!

Great story - and I had no trouble suspending belief on the scenario. Hell, if we could only post true to life stories here, 95% of Lit would be gone.

Great story I really loved it and would love to read more about the incounters of Matt, Erica and Amy.

That was a great short story shame you have not written more recently.

tuvok2006uk

Great story.. Matt is a lucky fucker!!

Hi altego

Just love your tale and have read it more than twice.

This is how it should be, hot, steamy, wet sex!

Thank you for your tale.

Please write more!!!!!!!!!!!!

DP was missing from the great action. Thanks for the hot tale.

And so does his daughter.

The whole story needs to be followed up- what on earth do they say to each other the next do they say to each other ? does her daddy set up gang bangs for Amy and her mother- don't leave it there- and or do more incest stories WE WANT MORE- Ron

That a good erotic story to read

My boxer briefs have a nice wetness from leaking lube

Loved this story, more please!

I've never fully enjoyed stories where the wife will do anything and everything for strangers, that she has always refused to do for her husband first. Matt should have been first in his wifes ass, not just an afterthought, only getting a go because he happened to be there, and she didn't know it was him. You can bet that, if he hadn't gotten home early, he would still never have had that ass, but everyone else would have from then on.

More parts please :)

Sexually stimulating but without either literary or erotic merit.

Pure porn. A stroke story if there ever was one. Although not high art it is humorous as hell and highly arousing. A sex oriented family that fucks together stays together.

Great story live the clean up sluts these two turned into

Nice now to think it not really I think it's something like in my younger years it happens more than you think a woman needs sex and a close darter well it gets done when the husband is gone for longer than he should, You Men think before you go and live a hot woman and darter for a time a little bit of the drink and it's know hole barn

İ am surprisüd both of them didn't get pregnant I did my girl friend and her mom got them both pregnant both have garters nylons must have on get gangbanged bareback take loads of sperm in them not even clean up taking on groups of guys until Sunday night after their last group fest both knocked up sametime group of black guys even told both your only having bareback gangbangs they both end up three black kids each that all they for both days letting black guys fuck them

I know this is an old story but its still one of my favorites

Of the shorter highly fanciful stories I have read, these are the best.