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by My Erotic Trail
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Unbridled_Passionabout 17 years agobattling all those June bugs...
who really wins the battle? The leaf blower, or the bug guts on your shoes?
bluerainsabout 17 years agosound a bit
like love bug season..or in okeechobee Chizzywinks Blind Mosquitos time..those critters breed by the millions...ugh...blue
BOSTONFICTIONWRITERabout 17 years agoBug light
Creatively different. I love the images. Here hundreds of years later, we face a different and less lethal enemy, bugs instead of men with swords.
Me? I'd buy a bug light but they attract more than they kill.
I loved your poem. It made me think.
LeBrozabout 17 years ago~~
One of those fun writes of the battle with the elements — in the end, bugs win.
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