All Comments on 'Tales in Slavery Ch. 01'

Well this certainly whetted my appetite for the forthcoming chapters. The mixture of savage and tender eroticism was, I felt, nicely played and well written. Am very interested in where you go from here. I would have liked it to have been longer but it is always best to be left wanting more.

Dark, beautiful story, please keep writing.

I absolutely love your work. You are awesome!

Riviting! I need more, much more! This first chapter sets a grim mood and yet teases nicely with erotica.

but not very erotic, at least not yet.

It was all there, the terror, the creep factor, the chill. Fantastic start.

i read this story about 3 years ago, and absolutely loved it, it wasnt finished then, so disappointingly i waited patiently for it to be done. the years went by and i forgot the authors name, but not the story.... 3 weeks back i wanted to see if the story had been completed but couldnt remember what the authors name was.... glad i remembered because this story is dear to my heart... i love all the characters, including the nameless vampire and the others... congratulations on a great story, and hope you get to publish it one day.......i would pay money to have a copy of this, with some black and white pictures to go with it......G