Loved it, very well written, just a great story!
great story, well written.
I especially enjoyed the balance between pace and deliciously saucy descriptive passages.
you certainly captured the moment and threw in quite a twist at the end. I'm going to have to change your name to Alfred 'Itchcock'..haha
That was one wicked twist at the end. I full out blinked, tilted my head, and clapped. You've done well. Didn't at all clue in it wasn't the intended person there.
Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm.......a zombie rapist made me extremely horny.....I would love to read more.;)
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