All Comments on 'Us in Haiku'

by StressingAsian

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Great Images

I liked it all, but especially Summer.

WhiteWave48WhiteWave48almost 17 years ago
Delicate richness

There's a delicate richness in the way you've used language in this beautiful series of images representing a sexual relationship. Constructed around the cycle of blossom and bloom, the progression of thought lingers briefly in the earthy reality of summer, such a contrast to the lightness of spring. Beautiful.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Sweet little poem...

I'm not too much in the comment mood, so I'll ditch the flowery stuff and just say it like it is: I thought it was a sweet little poem which recognized that renewed zest for life one experiences at the beginning of a new season; especially when sharing the changes with a loved one. That was one hell of a terrible sentence, but...there you go...

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