All Comments on 'Dad's Surprise'

loved the characters...loved the situation...loved the end.

good job!

I'd love to read more about these two. I'm a shameful pervert too,cause I love stories about step-dads fucking behind (or in front of) their wives.

I just loved your story.

just one thing ... wut dude sits down to pee at home?

To answer that one pee question. Any man thats been trained by the wife.

liked it,damm i wish she was my stepdaughter.i am looking forward to the next episode.ask her to wear those pretty panties for you.rumpman.

From one author to another.

- Writerotica

I loved this story and the language used. It's one of the best erotic stories I've read for ages. I'll definitely be wanting to read more from this author.

Very, very nice. I enjoyed it immensely, please write more!

this story was particularly hot to me because i have worn my stepdaughters panties for years before i got caught by her and had to face up to my desires. she was very similar to yhe girl in the story and i am rock hard just thinking about fucking my baby.

This type of story is not something i would normally be in to, yet i found it very arousing. A good story.

Very nice story. Made me hard as hell, thinking about having my way with my daughter.

im a woman and i loved it it made me come so good

loved it, well done! well written & very erotic.

Absolutely HOTT story, keep up the good work!!

I LOVED it!! So Arousing!

"Tell him to come I need him!"

SO HOT. WELL DONE!

wow.. ok im loving this.. cept.. i was imagining it was my step brother ;)

wow!!!!! brings back memories of when i first tasted my daughters panties she was 14 at the time and i still do it today shes 17 now i loved it thanks for posting

This story made me cum so hard (18 year old girl) love it :D

very well written

This story got me so wet. Very well written. I really love it when the dialogue involves "daddy." Turns me on so bad.

Thank you for your great story! As the daughter third of a Daddy, Daughter, and Mother trio, I really enjoyed reading this story that you have well-written here! My own story started long before I became 18 and happilly still happens quite often still today! I am now 59 and both Mom and Dad are both 81 but we do still get together for some good old fucking, sucking, and licking together! Thanks again for a great story!

I'm literally the wettest I have ever been I wish I had a daddy like that to fuck me when my mom isn't around

Just cummed reading story. Would love to jerk off in front of young girl than lick my cum

I just hope he goes back for more

Very great lt got me pump up,from begining to end

Awesome story. Sure wish I had a daughter, step daughter or niece.