All Comments on 'The Trophy'

I don't find this arousing at all

I thought this was a very unusual and erotic story, mixed with the illustrations which were awesome. More please!

Your demon doesn't need to explain everything. And its exclamations of "Bitch" and "Cunt" kinda reduce the atmosphere of the whole story.

This has potential though, perhaps better told through the POV of the victim.

dame it! finish the job.

This was a good story. Just the ending needed improvement.and if I may say so myself, this lamara sounds like a succubus.

Nooooooooo.