by Lillygirlx0x0
Luvd it! u took my inner desire n wrote it down for every1 2 read!
U betta have another one cummin...
I love to read about a girl getting carried away by her lust. . .and the nightclub is the perfect place for that.. .thank you for getting me all stiff and throbbing. . .
Liked it, though it could have been longer. I also prefer having stories where we know the characters names, but you're off to a nice start!
What a hot story.. very vivid, every detail had me captivated, longing for more. I look forward to reading Part II & III....
Thanks!
Dawg
This is one of the hottest stories I've ever read. Can't wait to read all you've written. But based on this one story, you are a treasure, Lilygirl!
I was imagining myself as her in that story. That was so... *shivers*
Your command of the language is enviable. I love that they don't have names yet. You waste no words on fillers or unnecessary details and that turns me on because none of that is there to distract. Bravo. I must now pillage your portfolio.
I never quite understood the process from the female point of view before, but I think I get it now. You did a great job of putting the reactions to a heavy seduction into words. Thanks for getting through to me, and also for a very good read.