All Comments on 'Girlfriend's Son'

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oriondogoriondogalmost 17 years ago
Is this a true story

If it is, I should tell you its Friday the 13th. Who do you sleep with when you go to Joanne's house now?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
I loved your story

I love sucking a young virile cock and feel it explode in my mouth!! Your story made me cum profusly

cutandhornycutandhornyalmost 17 years ago
Great!

I found this story interesting and arousing. Wish I knew a kid like Ben!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Lovely Story

Introducing a young man to the joys of sex is a wonderful experience for both parties. This story portrays that extremely well and very sensatively. All in all a very well done contribution.

taxpapabobtaxpapabobover 14 years ago
Getting Wild in the Wild

Beautiful HOT SEX! This is a very warm description of a blowjob -- but I cannot believe this is our hero's first time bringing joy to a young cock. It certainly makes the reader feel good.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Horny

Omg Im a girl and I'm soo horny right now

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
lovely

enjoyed this a lot - can't wait to read part 2 + 3 my wank was hot and my spunk flowed forcefully...

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

some one needs to spell.? it swollen but halk hard.? does not make sence.?

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
very hot

love your story made me so hard an precum to ooze out i have never suck a cock but after reading this i want to suck a hard cock

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
smiley

"some one needs to spell.? it swollen but halk hard.? does not make sence.?"

someone needs to read before correcting others you read it wrong he spelled it right

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

At all of you anons trying to correct each other :

Before you go and correct someone else, you should probably at least know what the fuck you're talking about. Use proper punctuation, grammar and spelling. What hypocritical fuck heads.

On that note, this story was good, but a little fast, and there were editing errors. I liked it overall, though. Four stars.

HarleyGuy228HarleyGuy228about 11 years ago
Very Hot Story

I would love reading a continuation of this story line grammatical errors and all.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Fuck

Shit. This story made me cum so hard. My boyfriend and I love to suck each others cocks. There's no feeling like sucking your partners manhood until he explodes down your throat. Love Ben. Wish I could meet someone like him and fuck him. I want to suck him and make him moan. Then I would fuck his asshole. This story turned me on.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
this was great story

I love the taste of a nice cock in my mouth

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Too short

A little short. 18 year old would keep on going and a middle aged man with such a prize would most likely would want more. I sure would. LOL Great story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Great story

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