All Comments on 'The Frat, the Cop, and the Sex'

by gaymancloz

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MissouribiguyMissouribiguyalmost 17 years ago
Man, that was hot

Hey man, I hope you write some more. that was really hot.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Hot!!!

... that didn't happen in my fraternity - but I wish it had!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
please write us some more!

Now that he's a pledge, he'll be working extra hard!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
nicely done

i found the story to move at a decent pace. And while i did guess the twist, it was still an enjoyable one. I look forward to the story continuing. :) xo

Scott

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Where is the next chapter?

It seemed really interesting to stop here...Wish you could continue this one day...

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

omg give me moree now!!! i demand it of u

lonesomedove66lonesomedove66almost 12 years ago
Clever clever story

That was brilliant I sincerely hope there is more to this. Will he be mad that he was had or grateful for the lesson??? As Anon said more please....

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

Would be nice to see this continued

gaymanclozgaymanclozover 10 years agoAuthor
thanks

i wrote this story years ago and it is nice to see people still enjoy it. I was a lot younger and a less experienced writer. I guess i'll have to work on a sequel for you all. December 2013?

thongpantythongpantyabout 10 years ago
Good story

I liked it very much, would love to read a fallow up story.

screedbearscreedbearover 7 years ago
Stop Dreaming

Get the right idea of size, your fantasizing. Would have been more only 1 cause you have no idea. Maybe a wish because you are undersized yourself.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
this was great

I really enjoyed your story ... nice premise that I'd seen before but adding in the cop was a good new direction ... and then your final twist ... outstanding ... and all on video? you've haven't posted in ten years but if you find this note, I'd love to see another chapter ... sounds like it is a fun frat :)

zazrix9zazrix9over 5 years ago
OMG

I'd speed all the time if that would happen to me, at least three or four times a day. My ass would be in heaven.

mic1980devmic1980dev2 months ago

love it, fucking great story , nice tricking, please more, more such frat hazings

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