by gaymancloz
Hey man, I hope you write some more. that was really hot.
Now that he's a pledge, he'll be working extra hard!
i found the story to move at a decent pace. And while i did guess the twist, it was still an enjoyable one. I look forward to the story continuing. :) xo
Scott
It seemed really interesting to stop here...Wish you could continue this one day...
That was brilliant I sincerely hope there is more to this. Will he be mad that he was had or grateful for the lesson??? As Anon said more please....
i wrote this story years ago and it is nice to see people still enjoy it. I was a lot younger and a less experienced writer. I guess i'll have to work on a sequel for you all. December 2013?
Get the right idea of size, your fantasizing. Would have been more only 1 cause you have no idea. Maybe a wish because you are undersized yourself.
I really enjoyed your story ... nice premise that I'd seen before but adding in the cop was a good new direction ... and then your final twist ... outstanding ... and all on video? you've haven't posted in ten years but if you find this note, I'd love to see another chapter ... sounds like it is a fun frat :)
I'd speed all the time if that would happen to me, at least three or four times a day. My ass would be in heaven.
love it, fucking great story , nice tricking, please more, more such frat hazings