aroused by. 1 for syntax and word choice = an average of "3." I think it would be helpful for you to have an editor whose first language is American English. jjws%)
keep writing.
I really enjoyed reading this one. You could easily turn this story into a series. Keep up the great work.
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5 for the idea--ideal which I share and thus am
aroused by. 1 for syntax and word choice = an average of "3." I think it would be helpful for you to have an editor whose first language is American English.
jjws%)
Good story
keep writing.
Great Story
I really enjoyed reading this one. You could easily turn this story into a series.
Keep up the great work.
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