All Comments on 'From Twilight to Twilight'

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YourLittleAngelleYourLittleAngelleover 16 years ago
Beautiful

Hypnotizing and haunting, this is one of the most lush, unique, entrancing, and just plain gorgeous stories I've read in a while! Fantastic. Thanks for sharing it.

FirebatFirebatalmost 15 years ago
Marvelous

This is an amazing piece of erotic literature. Flowing speech, capture of the sublime, and a grasp and command of language I fail to see a flaw in.

Write more. :P

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Accidental thrills

I stumbled onto this story by coincidence and am now amazed by your writing, amazed enough to leave a comment.

You have such a subtle way with words, such a rare grasp of language. Please continue writing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Sad but beautiful

Wow...that was deep but geez such a sad tale.

DRayElliottDRayElliottabout 10 years ago
Damn...

I agree with anon, I wish I could scrub this story from my brain, I hate sad, melancholy stuff like this.

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