All Comments on 'Yes'

For your first submission this isn't bad at all. In fact I liked it a lot! Your punctuation needs a bit of work though cause you put commas in places they shouldn't be...unless it was supposed to be like that for some reason. Nonetheless, kudos to you.

Yes, yes, yes! This poem is so powerful and sweet at the same time. It totally summarizes what I would like a certain someone to know. *sigh*

Not bad at all. It's a powerful poem and "yes" is a very powerful word.