All Comments on 'Second Chances'

Glad to see you continue your McKenzie family. Can't wait to read more.

Wonderful to see you are back - I'm looking forward with joy to read every chaper you will add!

Great story, I can't wait to read the next chapter!

I have read all your other stories posted here and I love them. I am glad to see you back. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Thank you for your warm welcome! They failed to put my author's note that was supposed to be at the beginning of the story. I am happy to finally be done with school - yeah! No more research papers, no more exams, no more tutorials to prepare for - few! So now, I have two months off before I start working. I decided to write the story of how the older two McKenzie brothers found their wives. I hope you enjoy.

Cheers,

Haremgirl

It's wonderful having you back, my dear harem girl. And, to introduce us to (what I expect will be) another branch of the McKenzie family. What a delicious morsel of lust and passion it is to start out your new chapter of the saga.

I, too, look forward to the story's coming chapters.

Great start to a novel. Almost flawless yet intriguing and captivating writing. Can't wait to read more. Thanks

And I'm hooked!

Roger

help me reconcile planting a new garden,

having already planted the fall crops

and

late harvest peaches that need to be sold or preserved

just exactly when did all these simultaneous events occur?

Pretty corny...

they never had breakfast!