by haremgirl
Using 21st century idiom in an 18th or early 19th century setting destroys the credibility of your story.
Perhaps you should do some research before starting to write.
Good luck!
Dont read it...I hate it when people leave rude comments... Stop reading if you don't like it!!! I loved it...Dont let some idiotic person stop you from doing something you are great at!!!
She can do and say whatever she'd like in HER story. If you don't like it, go write your own. I love it, keep it up!
So happy that you are back!! Keep up the wonderful work Haremgirl :)
Shame! Shame! Shame! To the commenter criticizing our wonderful writer's lovely, hot and thoroughly real story of romance--of people searching for that most precious of commodities, love. And all because of a single possibly misused idiom. Poor fellow or lady, you missed the point, and it's your loss.
Haremgirl writes amazing stories. She gives all of her fortunate (and hopefully grateful) readers such sweeping, true-to-life and hot tales of men and women struggling for a little happiness and love. You go, grrl!
Could you really understand a story that was written using only the grammar, idiams and spelling of an historical period. Try reading Chauser. Most people just want a good read.