All Comments on 'Clitty, Clitty, Bang, Bang'

So good I was left wanting more. Looks as if this story can't continue; but I hope you have more stories in you.

A chapter on how she saves his finances, the car, and proves the soon to be Ex, is not broke. A little revenge on the bookeeper would be nice as well.

Thanks for a great story.

with one of the previous comments. This is a good lead in for at least one more chapter.

Great story. A bit fast on the uptake so it really needs another chapter (or two or three). Can't wait to read more.

No, don't continue. This one was painfully enough.

using gadgets and cumming out on top. TK U MLJ LV NV

Add my voice to those saying it could and should be developed further. You created a platform that could go in so many directions, and to just terminate it when the tale could get so much more interesting is a real shame.

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CONGRATULATIONS. This reads and feels true, Congratulations to your editor as well. I love the imagery and the thrifty use of modifiers. You obviously know your way around a sentence. Ilook forward to reading more of your stories.

Love it. AAAA+++

From the title to the last word, a classic.