by ChristineR
Wake me when you write something worth reading!
Really good, I think you should have a part two.. The straight wife should pleasure her new friend properly.. Good writing loved the wild passion.. thanks!!
Hot!
As for the one that slept... Are you always that sleepy? You must be a riot in bed!! :-P
Keep up the good writing, Christine!
This story was hot beyond belief! Please "pleasure" us with a sequel.
Why is it lesbian stories can often turn men on - and this one sure did. A Chapter two of this would be brilliant, especially if the husbands got involved !
WOW! That was so HOT! I wanted to be the fly on the wall watching you two get it on! Very good story and can’t wait to read another one! Mmmmm, I was so hard because one of my favorite things is to please a woman with my tongue!
You write well. Your descriptions are nuanced. I have read all of your stories over the past 12 hours and have given every one a 5. I'm impressed with the quality of the writing and the evocation of intense and complex sexuality and arousal in all of your stories.
I don't really care whether these stories are true or not, but I must observe that they feel completely genuine to me.
I can't imagine how amazing your writing can become if you push the envelope beyond what fascinates you and explore the unknown beyond what you have done with such accomplished mastery so far.
Hope you will write more.
Straight, gay, lesbian, bi- vain attempts of language to freeze and define what nerve-endings and imagination so readily embrace. You write well. Thank you.
There is nothing more sexy then a lovely woman seducing another woman for the first time!! This story was a "10". Thnx
Why on Earth wouldn’t a woman that has sex for the first time with another woman “return the favor” to make the other woman come also?!THIS HAS ABSOLUTELY NO SENSE!Surely,SHE WOULD KNOW VERY WELL what to do,so SHE WOULD DEFINITELY RETURN THAT FAVOR!STOP WRITING SUCH NONSENSES!
A description of a very passionate but unanticipated experience. I am surprised that Maude didn't pursue her after the party...