All Comments on 'Melanie & Her Coach Ch. 01'

Ignore the "guardians of morality" that post their snide rantings. It's futile to waste time reading their posts.

Keep writing; there are many of us who do like this kind of FANTASY.

hi it was fantasic. im a 24 blk female and i love these types of stories... keep it up

You should link it to the other in series, So that it's actually counted as a series, However you go about doing that. A few typoes and errors in punctions (Noticed at least one stray quotation mark) But the story is good, and without any glaring flaws.

I little crude and straight to the point. But it's ok, so far.