All Comments on 'A Wife's First Swallow'

I've been reading stories on Literotica for years, but this is the first time I've ever commented. This was great...a real life, erotic story between a loving couple, that had me laughing out loud. A real story with real feelings. Anyone should be able to relate to this story An example of the fact that funny things can and will sometimes happen when practicing the art of lovemaking!

In reading this, I think it would be good if Literotica created a category for true-life stories just like this one.

Wonderfully told. Similar thing happened to a g/f of mine when her mom called on her birthday. :D Thanks for making me smile.

As the other reader said, a well-told, true-life couples story. Carry on!

As the other reader said, a well-told, true-life couples story. Carry on!

Thanks for writing. Good work

I loved the humor and the ending. Did you mean she was going to have a baby? Will there be a ch.2?

this is one of the best realistic story I ever had the pleasure of reading on literotica. the story was well written and I'm quite sure similar things have happened to a lot of couples out there. Thank you for writing such a wonderful story and I hope this one will give the inspiration to write more like this. Cheers Roger.

Just so much fun to read and see in the mind. Thank you<p>PT

that's funny and unexpected... or let's say that's unexpectedly funny?

well done Jess. A very sexy honest and amusing story. I loved you descriptions and your honest self critical insights. I'm sure you are a very sexy lady! (I got hard thinking about you waiting for hubby in that basque!) Great story! Keep up the good work and stay sexy! I hope you have many more to tell!

Fabulous I trully hope it was real. I loved the way it was all done between a loving married couple without the need for silly exagerations.

I too can relate to the whole taste thing, but like you I figure that my hubby is worth it.

I loved the way he teased you while you were on the phone, I could imagine my hubby trying to do the same if I let him.

Let us know how the next anniversary goes.

S.

A nice lighthearted story. You write well. I hope your back is doing better.

a good orgasm, or a good laugh? Thank you for sharing. This is so real to me, and this is why (well, one of the reasons why) I read Lit. Real life is good.

Great story. Loved the fact that you didn't exagerate or make it sound like a lame porno movie. Very real and honest. Makes me think of all the ordinary people I know.

What a great read so real, loved the way you paced it (no not that) it stands out as being sooooo true. (try getting Neil to eat some pineapple for a few days before going down on him, what he eats will (does) effect how he tastes...

It gets easier with time

Well-done!

Make him eat more fruit, drink pineapple juice, quit smoking, and skip the broccoli. It will taste much better.

I felt your pain, but you can keep the rest.