All Comments on 'The Ball Game'

by MrsCanyon

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skip.69skip.69almost 17 years ago
Brilliant

Like all your other stories. I wish that I lived near you, Mrs. Canyon. And what a lucky husband you have that he encourages you to indulge this way!

sarge13sarge13almost 17 years ago
Hot

Very nice, hard to do in even in a SUV, but a fun story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
No imagination?

Shit dude I have a hard cock and it's about to burst. Many writers have written about their wives getting fucked by other men. My wife got fucked a lot by other men. She did it over and over again and we never tire of the repetition. Now shove that up your nerd ho hum asshole...Oh I'm talking to the creep just under me...hey that's a good place for you creep...under me while I ram my cock in your mouth. Take no notice of the creep or anyone that doesn't like your story...oh ...God...I'm cumming...ooohhhhhhhhhhhhhh.......ooooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhh......ahaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
hillariously high school

So the play game is whatever you say.....really not original.

So the number of 4 friends....why not 40 with horse sized dicks (rhetorical)

The wife plays the part of a piece of meat and there is nothing erotic about that or seductive in your writing about directing a slut fest.

This was poorly done.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
I loved it

I love hot loving wives you get filled! Nice work!

stu421vstu421valmost 17 years ago
Lucky guy

Loved the story, you are a lucky man to have a hot wife like that - keep them stories coming and that will keep us cumming

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Great Stuff

I really get a kick out of these stories ....... don't ask me why because I daresay that if it was me that was the husband, I'd want to kill them all.

But, that is the whole point of stories and fantasies; you can do anything you like to anyone you like.

marriedpervsmarriedpervsalmost 15 years ago
MMmmmmmarried pervs loved it

Loved,loved, loved, LOVED it! Wild, wicked, wanton and fucking horny. I really enjoyed this story and it inspired a fingers in my pussy session of my own as a result!

Thanks sooo much!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
5/14/07 - Gay cucking fag. Wanting to hump some guys mouth?? Go to the Gay Male section

Occasional diversity, fine. But this guys not married to her, she's married to all the other dick she's getting. He fucks her and can't feel a thing?? Gee, how erotic. My wife has her snatched fucked into a wet leather purse and now there's no friction at all. How wonderful. You and the cucking author should go have your wimped out fag fest somewhere else. A real man wouldn't need to get his buddies to satisfy his wife. Won't be long before she realizes that and is out the door.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Great story … ignore the weedy brained bitter whingers: :)

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