All Comments on 'Janitor'

If so you are as just as sick as the writer and narrator.

The subtext is class struggle - the triumph of the superior underdog by means of using the social taboos of the proletariat against them. This is the basis of all great art, and certainly of all great pornography. So your structure is intact, you just need to take it to the next level.

There could be more character development if you want to create sequels.

I liked it I must be a sick fuck.I see no problem with a little fiction and a man in charge in this day and age. I liked the style I hope to read more. What was that person doing reading stories in this context in the first place.

Well written, fully enjoyed.

should have kept the pics though

I want this author to pull me across his lap, face down, forcing me to feel his raging hard on against my pussy while he slaps my ass and molests my breasts in a lust induced, animalistic frenzy, all while my silent, fearful, teardrops water the ground below us..