All Comments on 'Neighbours'

Was this a real event. My wife and i have enjoyed a few sessions and know that they're not everything that a fantasy could be, but i felt that this story was a bit lacking in descriptive detail. Nice to see a story from England though. Mike

Tja, you've asked for feedback, so here is mine.

I think the story would improve if there would be more leading up to the new neighbours getting naked together for the first time, then to these same people having sex as a couple in the presence of the other couple going at it too, and at last them swapping spouses. Well-educated people, wealthy enough to live in expensive houses with large gardens in a nice collage, should at least have more dialogue before taking steps with so much impact on their social live.

Ed Marcgrave