All Comments on 'Famine'

I wonder how many people will get your point. The imagery is great; I especially like "and hearts mired in a shallow bowl." Really careul, effective mix of theme with metaphors for famine. Thanks for the read. :)

This poem was mentioned in Wednesday's New Poems Reviews.

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doggeral, please!I was told about you, you rock! This isn't bad poetry either, Some of it damn good-

Pity the drivel as tears are shed

and hearts mired in shallow bowls,

Correcting myself - superlative.