All Comments on 'Poker'

No real build-up, and straight into it as if it were an everyday occurrence.

I gave it up when I thought of a 42 inch behind in a thong and what that would look like. No thanks - the start was bad enough and that just finished me from reading on !

enough to finish, just couldn't make it till the end. Mom, pizza, DVD gee never read that before.

Lol, I like the sex, but the setup needs some work. Seems like you just rushed things a little too much.

The comments so far strike me as much too negative. Maybe the critics haven't noticed that the author is 18 to 22 years old? Given that his age, of course he has much to learn. But we readers should encourage him, not stunt his enthusiastic exploration of the growing and happy practice of motherfucking! Here's a lad who's fascinated by the idea of a son shoving his stiff dick up his own mother's twat and unloading his balls up the same cunt he came out of. Maybe he's already enjoying himself--as any son would--up between his mother's legs. If he isn't, then for sure he soon will! At his age, he has to unload his hot balls 2, 3, 4 times a day, and we know where's his favorite place to fuck and cream! More stories, please, from this gifted young writer!

I came so hard! You have to write more about mother/son incest stories!

"...her measurements are about 36G-34-42,and I know from looking at her clothes, bras and panties so as you can imagine big breasts, a fairly slim waist and a big bubble butt."

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Slim waist? She's a horse, man. Did you measure her when she was nine months pregnant? OMG! You really tip your hand about not knowing anything about women's measurements. And a "G" cup? You might as well have a neon sign flashing "No Clue Here! Never seen a live woman naked! VIRGIN! VIRGIN!"

At least you had the decency to write that at the opening, so I didn't have to read more than a few lines of garbage to realize it was a complete waste of my time.

How do you mess up strip poker?

Was mom a cow ?, give us a break 36 G moo moo. After that I had to stop reading.....

the normal tited woman don't have a chance now days, 32 34 even 36 a are beautiful tits. now everbody likes moo moo cows.

I gave this story one star because there wasn't a lower rating