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Virtual Reality: Pokemon D/P Ch. 1

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous06/17/07

Great stuff!

excellent story! can't wait for the next chapter. thoroughly enjoyed the concept of the 'adult rules'.

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by Anonymous06/18/07

Freakin' Sweet

Good God, that was extremely entertaining as well as arousing. Carry on.

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by Anonymous06/24/07

Great work!

Great work you guys. Normally I'm not into this stuff, but I've read some of yours in this series. I take my hat off to the lot of you for braving the chain story scene and getting the job done so well. So many of your scores are good, so I hope my votes for all of you have taken you one step closer to the little red H.

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by Bridget6902/11/08

More than just child's play.

Interesting and original adult perspective of what is usually intended to be a kid's game.

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by Anonymous07/29/10

Wtf?

A 3'5'' 10 year old? Damn that's short.

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by Anonymous07/29/10

GREAT!!! I want more :)

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by Anonymous10/25/10

nice

Just great. very nice guys, found it much more intresting than i had hoped for. this was a great story look forward to more.

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by Anonymous01/27/11

Details

I love the amout of detail in your stories, I'm impressed that you actually have the patience to write with such attention to the little things.

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by Anonymous02/27/12

More oh please more

This is good you should do more of it

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by tonylongtin07/22/12

you need to do more

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by Anonymous10/21/12

Amazing

My favorite Pokemon story now! Please do more.

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