the way this piece moved. Your lines have a good rhythm, almost song-like and the emotions you convey are universal.You express longing very well...and the obvious craving to be a part of something...Whether to be part of something you perceive to be wrong or just a part of *anything* .. :)This particular watcher seems lonely.
I really liked this piece, could identify with it on many levels.
This was such a smooth read - seamless and serene. The intensity of thought was there, with a subtle hint of rhyme, and you captured the moment in such a natural way that the scene came alive in my mind.
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