All Comments on 'Natalie's Smile'

good story..very hot..I await the next chapter

ohh my, youve wrote my fantasy! i'd love to fuck one of my old school teachers! good work.

loved it...got me so fucking hard

it was a good fantasy and quite hot, but just had some plot holes, the main one being, why would she be on birth control if she hadn't had sex?

Noone ever says "I am on birth control"

It's usually "I'm on..." Noone's that polite when they're cumming

The story has a lot of potential, but the endless typos eventually drove me crazy. Please edit it for spelling and grammar and resubmit it.