All Comments on 'Fern Ch. 02'

by SleepingLove

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Sigh

It would have been a good story but the constant wrong usage of words, grammars, spellings and tenses really killed my interest. It was grating on my nerves. Further more DK and ED had commented about your previous chapter and you should have heed their advice but seemed like you were too stubborn to listen. So, a 25 would be appropriate here.

kitty5670kitty5670almost 17 years ago
Very enjoyable

I loved it. Keep going - I'm hooked now.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Continue w/ Next Chapter

I really like your story and can't wait for the next installment. There are some grammatical errors, but nobody is perfect and just watch out for them next time.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
please write more.

it's wonderful so far please write more soon.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Carry On

So what happens next and when can we find out

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
You've got talent!

Please don't stop!!!! When I read Ch 1 I loved it so much I came back everyday to check and see if you wrote Ch 2. Please keep going!! You should really turn it into a full story and see if you can get it published. Keep writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
So wonderful

You are an amazing writer. Keep up the awesome work. Can't wait for the next installment. I agree to keep it going as much as possible.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
next???

great story please continue it soon..

SleepingLoveSleepingLoveabout 16 years agoAuthor
ATTENTION!!!!!!

I am working on the third part of this story. Expect it to be a little bit more refined than the other two. I noticed when I was reading back over this chapter that I went from third person point of view to first, OOpsie. Just pretend it's all in third person ;). Anyways, I'm working on the third part and if anybody is in the editting program and have an interest in this story, please email me. I'm going to have the third part editted and I want someone who has already read the first and second chapter. It would be a hassle to have to send them the other two.

Well, enjoy.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Love it!

Love it! Great story! Cant wait for the next chapter! Thanks!

Lara_MoonspellLara_Moonspellalmost 16 years ago
And...

What... where is the next part??? MOre!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
ever gonna finish it??

you have left this story go for too long I wish you would come back and finish it.. at least one more chapter so we know how it ends..it's wonderful.

blkbutterflyblkbutterflyover 13 years ago
third part please

what happened to the third part you were working on?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
More please!

I hope you write some more about Fern and Arin soon, because i want to know what happens=)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
i loved

when is part 3 coming?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
more

when will there be MORE!!!???

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
More!

Oh please write more! This is brilliant! Will he get the girl?? Will he punish the bitch?!

Please don't stop!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

please write more

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
please

More please

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