by SleepingLove
It would have been a good story but the constant wrong usage of words, grammars, spellings and tenses really killed my interest. It was grating on my nerves. Further more DK and ED had commented about your previous chapter and you should have heed their advice but seemed like you were too stubborn to listen. So, a 25 would be appropriate here.
I really like your story and can't wait for the next installment. There are some grammatical errors, but nobody is perfect and just watch out for them next time.
Please don't stop!!!! When I read Ch 1 I loved it so much I came back everyday to check and see if you wrote Ch 2. Please keep going!! You should really turn it into a full story and see if you can get it published. Keep writing.
You are an amazing writer. Keep up the awesome work. Can't wait for the next installment. I agree to keep it going as much as possible.
I am working on the third part of this story. Expect it to be a little bit more refined than the other two. I noticed when I was reading back over this chapter that I went from third person point of view to first, OOpsie. Just pretend it's all in third person ;). Anyways, I'm working on the third part and if anybody is in the editting program and have an interest in this story, please email me. I'm going to have the third part editted and I want someone who has already read the first and second chapter. It would be a hassle to have to send them the other two.
Well, enjoy.
you have left this story go for too long I wish you would come back and finish it.. at least one more chapter so we know how it ends..it's wonderful.
I hope you write some more about Fern and Arin soon, because i want to know what happens=)
Oh please write more! This is brilliant! Will he get the girl?? Will he punish the bitch?!
Please don't stop!