All Comments on 'Rough Love'

there was nothing sick about that, i loved it! and the ending was perfect :)

Great. It was actually believable.

By the sick for the sick

I love a guy who's not a pussy!

this is for the person who titled Sick...get the heck out of here...if you don't like the stories about BDSM, then maybe you need to leave...this was a story about a little bitch that's gotten her own for to long, and needed to be taught a lesson... taught a lesson by a very kind Master who had finally had it with his slave for her disrespect...get a life you idiot and find some other stories to slam...i thouoght it was wonderful, and i applaud the author...thank you

The story walks the fine line between dominance and abuse. Doms who strike their subs out of anger are nothing more than abusers hiding behind the guise of D/s. Anger, not love, motivates the dominant in this story, and that's ultimately why I didn't like him as a character. His pet should walk out because he's not fit to be her master.

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Technically, the prose has problems with grammar and syntax, and the author's sentence construction skills need work. I suppose my biggest problem with the story is the fundamental disconnect I feel with the author's perspective on the D/s lifestyle.

Yeah well the story was good, the writing needs a lot of work. Too many sentences that didn't make good sense. It made for a hard read. Too many times I had to read a sentence twice or three times before I got it right.

My favorite line - I heard an almost unheard moan. Or something like that. Interesting.

Good story but please, read what you write, edit, read again and edit until it's smooth.

I'd say the story gets a 100 for content, a 0 for clarity.

I suggest you get in the habit of finishing what you start because that was an absolutely amazing story. It was the best I've read by far. Obviously, this all hinges on preference, but that doesn't take away from the fact that it was a sexy as hell story.

I loved the emotion within this story. I am a slave...and my Master sometimes gets so angry with me for trying to 'co-Master' as he says. I want so much...and sometimes he doesn't give it to me...but when I'm good and patient, he gives me all that I could ask for and more.

It was very believable.. I loved it

The content was good, but decent masters would never hit in anger, just like good parents. Punishment is different... it's calculated, planned, and rational. And never done when angry. The last thing that should happen is a pissed off dom (rightfully or not) punishing a sub in the spur of the moment.

re the lifestyle problems mentioned. The two characters in the story seem to be playing at what they think the BDSM lifestyle is like, without really getting it. The woman claims to be a sub, yet is rude and derogatory toward her lover/Master. In response, he reacts in anger and resentment toward her, losing control. I found it believable as two people playing at BDSM, but that's all.<br><br>

The writing itself definitely needs serious editing. There are sentences screaming out for commas, misspellings such as "loose" for "lose", and a sort of jumbled flow that detracts from the story line as well.<br><br>

For those who like a story where a rude and unattractive woman gets "put in her place" by a brutal man pretending to be a Dominant, this is the story for you.

Really?

don't know if it sounds strange, but she is one lucky girl, even while it is a story, deep inside I wished I was her.

first time I ever had that feeling.

greetings

a ''innocent '' little kitten

I have to say I love this story. It was written well and had a good idea, but then again I have a brat locked away deep inside who loves to come out once in a while just to be put back in place. Loved it.

♡ Bound's Inner Brat ♡

That was so amazing ive never read something that intense... Just beautiful, i couldnt stop reading.