by Linde
I loved this.. a bit short but good. I can't wait for the next one. Don't make the crap about the guy cumming inside the girl like all these other losers write about. Facial shots or tits shots are better. NO ANAL EITHER save that stuff for the faggots to read in the gay stories!
Or should I say "nice blow job". It all happened just a little fast but it was realistic . Take it a little slower and you will have a winning series .
There ain't nothing hotter than a sibling incest story where the guy comes inside his sis. What could possibly be more erotic than that?
---stand alone but most of the guys want more-more-more of the same-same-same
The picture on your profile made me want to PUKE!
PLEASE keep your lives to yourself!
And your writing is just as bad as the picture--pathetic story, terrible writing!
I've scored a bit high on this story (75), but all in all I've read other works you have done that are better. What I don't understand is, not only you but other writers as well get comments from readers that think the story is real !.
Anyway, Keep it up..thanks.
no guy that is teased and tormented by his sister would be close to her he would hate her and avoid her at all costs keep it atleast sounding realistic also get rid of the ugly picture on your bio page
You keep starting good stories then leave us hanging. Figuratively speaking, of course.
Please finish what you start! Your stories have a seed of greatness.
That is fucking amazing if my sis caught me she would beat me to death lol
Don't know if you're going to get this comment. You might not be an active member. This story sounds like something I might have wrote. I like it. It leaves the main character with a lot of unanswered questions and it was sort of real. A blow job or a hand job does go on between siblings very rarely does intercourse ever happened.
What an understanding sister. Its great she would provide him the magazines to jerk off too but then give him blowjobs, cumming in her mouth and showing her boobs too. She certainly wanted him to be happy, etc. Please write more about their escapades. Thanks.