by MungoParkIII
the flow is just gorgeous. People who write concrete poetry here (by concrete I mean precise wording, not the shape of the poem) should look at this poem to learn how to do it right. :)
Your poem has been recommended in the new poems review on the Poetry Feedback and Discussion forum. Thanks for the read.
Peace,
Angeline
I like how the wording of your illustrated poem gives the impression of rain and runoff from the pot. Thank you, I enjoyed.