This is very nice. It made me miss a French friend so much. Good luck in the contest.!
pretty good, although I find it hard to believe that somebody would be that fond of cheese.
A nice, short read. I especially liked the scene where he fingers her to orgasm against the wall. That was extremely hot!
A tasty French pastry--quite sexy too. The love scenes were appropriately steamy. Good luck in the contest.
You know how I feel about exhibitionism, Cerise. ;) I loved every word.
As far as stories go, this was a delight to read. However, I don't feel it really works the theme of the contest as it should. Still, the quality is there, but not necessarily theme-oriented. Good luck in the contest, though.
A fun read.
Like you, I love chocolate and cheese!
Cheese huh??....lol....fun....a quick read....good job....
What a fun read! Deserves a 6! -Well written, and a great story. Thankyou!
Loved it! Chocolate, cheese and rain, my favorites, all in one story!
Good luck in the contest,
I've never been a fan of cheese, but I did enjoy the story. A fun romp - both in Paris and the US. Well done, Cerise.
Super sexy, super sensuous – I am looking out for your future submissions. Good luck in the contest1 Pete.
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