All Comments on 'Cheese and Old Friends'

by CeriseNoire

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tickledkittytickledkittyover 16 years ago
Well done, Cerise!

This is very nice. It made me miss a French friend so much. Good luck in the contest.!

Boxlicker101Boxlicker101over 16 years ago
This was

pretty good, although I find it hard to believe that somebody would be that fond of cheese.

damppantiesdamppantiesover 16 years ago
Good one!

A nice, short read. I especially liked the scene where he fingers her to orgasm against the wall. That was extremely hot!

TE999TE999over 16 years ago
Nicely done!

A tasty French pastry--quite sexy too. The love scenes were appropriately steamy. Good luck in the contest.

slyc_willieslyc_willieover 16 years ago
Very sexy and inspiring

You know how I feel about exhibitionism, Cerise. ;) I loved every word.

MistaRheeMistaRheeover 16 years ago
French Pasties?

As far as stories go, this was a delight to read. However, I don't feel it really works the theme of the contest as it should. Still, the quality is there, but not necessarily theme-oriented. Good luck in the contest, though.

daftsparrowdaftsparrowover 16 years ago
Nice work

A fun read.

lisa123414lisa123414over 16 years ago
sweet

Like you, I love chocolate and cheese!

_Lynn__Lynn_over 16 years ago
Hmmmm..

Cheese huh??....lol....fun....a quick read....good job....

reignopheliareignopheliaover 16 years ago
Great read!

What a fun read! Deserves a 6! -Well written, and a great story. Thankyou!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
yummt story

Loved it! Chocolate, cheese and rain, my favorites, all in one story!

Good luck in the contest,

Maharat

RogueLurkerRogueLurkerover 16 years ago
Very nice

I've never been a fan of cheese, but I did enjoy the story. A fun romp - both in Paris and the US. Well done, Cerise.

PEATBOGPEATBOGover 16 years ago
Super!!!

Super sexy, super sensuous – I am looking out for your future submissions. Good luck in the contest1 Pete.

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