All Comments on 'Oops!'

Taking advantage of a drunk nymphet is disgusting,disgustingy erotic I am happy to say.

I loved the ending, it got a chuckle out of me, even though I knew it was going to happen.

The fact that the guy would take advantage of his younger sister-in-law is... is... AWESOME!

The story was well written and I like the last comment about the nightie sticking... most stories end shortly after the orgasm.

Complete and utter chaos at a family party is a tremendous set up for bed-time confusion and unitentional incest. Was it even incest though with no penetration? I think the lawyers would have to argue that one out. Good job

This writer has a way with words and a real skill with handling numbers of characters. I know this is fiction, but lots of it (until the last event) reads very much like the reality I know.

Fucking the sister-in-law is always fun but I was hoping for some mother-in-law action, too.

Well constructed and well written. Good job. Only, too bad your sister-in-law did not turn around and start making out with you and then as you slept given you a blow job. Now, that would have been a nice addition.

Still, it was a hot read the way that it is.

That was great , fucking great .I loved her " why does my nightie stick to my ass" . Nice touch .

Obviously your sis-in-law got fucked and maybe knocked up, by you. Am anxious to read further chapters to this erotic story.

I love short stories, funny is even better.

After graduating high school my girlfriend and I shared an apartment with another couple. One night I got really hammered after band practice and when I stumbled into the condo, I took a right out of the bathroom instead of a left towards my bedroom. I stripped off my clothes and crawled into bed next my girlfriend. Feeling her ass against me I got horny and proceeded to slip inside her wet pussy. I was to drunk to really get into it and after a nice slow fuck for about 20 minutes I came deep inside of her. After I slipped out she turned to me and said I better get back to my own bedroom before my girlfriend missed me. Yep, that's right, I fucked my buddy's girl in their room. Nothing was ever said about it and I'm grateful for that.