All Comments on 'Rian Ch. 02'

He's in love with her... but he won't be able to resist fucking all those other servant girls, will he? Sounds like a recipe for the beginning of a sexual adventure for both of them.

Great story. I can't wait to read more chapers. I love the characters and the sweetness of Rian.

Very nicely written with well developed characters. Can't wait to read more!!!

I'm looking forward to more!

i loved it so much. I would love to see rein show her more, maybe a little star crossed lovers intertwined

This was fantastic, especially for a first time story!!! I really loved the mutual power and innocence of Rian and Grace.. I love how Grace 'took his virginity' in a way, before he did her! Despite being a master/slave sort of pairing, the relationship seems delightfully "equal" for them. Plus, it was h-h-hotttt!

I sincerely hope that there is a Chapter 3 because this is outstanding!

awesome although he sounded a little scary"i can never let u go....

The characters were so innocent in a way but then they both took each other..

I really hope there are more stories about these two.

Good one !!!! njoyed reading it

Very enjoyable. I particularly liked the romantic end.

~daisy

Loved it!

Hello You wrote this in 2007 , you are a good writer what happened? It is now 2011 4 years after. Did someone discourage you from your writing abilities? Well they spoke with envy, please write again.

can you please come back and write some more to this story. i just love reading it.

Your either a virgin or you have no clue as to how the female body works. Go learn, enhance your writing skills, and try again.

your stories caused me to pay close attention and the second chapter made me melt, thanks again

Still a good premise.

Still much too fast.

Three stars.