All Comments on 'Waxley the Bold Ch. 01'

This is a really great start. It helps if the reader is familiar with Lord of the Rings as far as visualizing the characters. This story can go in some very interesting directions. Hope the next chapter is here soon!!

thanks for the work.

This is quite good, but you really towards the deep end with the purple prose huh? Specially in the last part. Waxley is a great character, his love interest, not at all.