All Comments on 'Bree and Tom'

Keep it up!

I generally like your stories, even though they're pretty dark. This one is particularly fucked up, but what bothers me is that lately you seem to be skimping on the details.

But agree with the previous comments. This would be a really great story if you filled in the details. For example, the scene at Tims bedside at the end could be very, very sexy with some detail. Also detail on how Bree seduced Tom in the ceiling whilst Tim looked on...

Lighting people on fire is mean-spirited at best.

I feel sorry for that poor guy...i'll change things up a bit in my story of this.

honestly, get an an imagination and some dignity..there is nothing dark here or interesting..same old crap, dad with a big cock, son wiht a little cock, and some stupid porno body bimbo, but what a new low..letting people die. What a fucking shmuck you are.

and such realism - family values -

Continuuuuuuuue!

your brain is really fucked up writing shit like this

Almost had some justice there. Its not funny to keep treating the military man this way. Tom and Bree both should have slowly roasted in that house. Tim needs to find a better woman. I know you think you are funny but you are just an idiot.

She has too much control over Tom. I don't like it when the bull is completely pussy whipped by the slutwife. Tom should have been like "burn bitch. Stud that I am I'll have a new c*nt in my bed in less than a week."

Doreen set the fire and I'm like. "You reap what you sow". The poor insane woman it's obviously breaking her that her Tom's cheating on her it's practically a mercy that she died.

Tim, I'm kind of indifferent about. Frankly with his own military training he should have been able to get himself out of the flames even with a tiny cock. If Tom made it to a door Tim should have been able to too, even though he was trying to save his Mother.

As a engaged girl with a hot father in law I support this kind of story hehe 😜

Such a guilty pleasure, want to see more of Tom and Bree

Perfect Tom is a real man, action man

Seriously this could be great with a little more effort, love Tom the military hunk hing like a horse

Burn 🔥 Timmy Burn

Needed more of Tom being naughty

Give us more of titanium Tom!

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