All Comments on 'Breakfast Buffet Babe'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Good storyline

Good storyline but toooooooo shorts

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Well crafted!

Too many wannabe erotic pieces depend on an improbability for the story line. Once past the MAJOR improbability, the rest hung together.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Suprise ending!

Story seemed to caputure what it would be like for a serving table. Good imagination (it was imagination wasn't it?)

Jim DoggetJim Doggetalmost 17 years ago
Now that was fun!

Loved it - just plain fun, well written and sexy. Great!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Wonderful piece

Will there be a sequel?

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