All Comments on 'Simon Says Fuck Me'

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LustHoseLustHoseover 16 years ago
Hey, i wanna be Him!

Looking forward to additional installments and character development.

The Journey is the Story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Where is the rest of the story??

Nice start.....except for the bisexual part, you could have left that out....but where is the rest....it's been over a year! You should never start a story you can't finish...it makes us crazy!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Great intro,but where's the story? Finish it dude!

I liked your intro to a story, but where's the rest? Don't listen to that comment about the bi thing. I think everyone is a little bi, but most people aren't confident enough in themselves to admit it to anyone, even them self.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
this sux... wheres the rest?

you build up to a potential story but end it at that... wtf... where's the good stuff?!?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

。。。。。。白痴

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Write more

This is really good. You should write more of the story so we can see what he did before he took over the world. What kind of erotic things did he do to people? Did he ever try to hypnotize a bunch of people at the one time? How did he hypnotize everyone to become ruler of the world?

gondaolgondaolalmost 11 years ago
YOU CAN"T

YOU NEED TO FINISH THIS

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