All Comments on 'Please Let Me Love You - Lesson 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Yooooouuuuu Willlll lllloooovvveeee meeeeee

I command...me the most master of all the one who , when God died left meee in charge...Barf...barff...puke puke

zaftigmelaniezaftigmelanieover 16 years ago
Beautiful start.....

I thouroughly enjoyed this and found myself longing to be the tattooed miss in the story. I'm anxious for the next installment. Very well written!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
You know what I found interesting?

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Despite the fact how clearly you do care for your, we'll say slave for now, showing her you care, addressing her in other fashions in anything other than her label, you capitalized the "s" when you called her "Slut". It's a considerate gesture, very sweet. However...

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I must ask, are you truly a Protector, one who feels the purpose of a "soul-mate"/submissive/slave (take your pick), is to allow you to guide them to what IS right in this wrong world?

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I merely ask because, through, I suppose "research" of mine, as well as being a part-taker, I've noticed that the relationship between a "Master/slave" rarely has such great respect as you do for your darling.

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I just found it all interesting the way you treated her. Even the compliment about the contrasting embellishment you gave her, to her beauty.

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Also, on a final note, fantastic story. It was absolutely amazing. Lovely enunciation and description. The story was fantastic.

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AudreyHepburnAudreyHepburnover 16 years ago
Terrific! Please Continue The Series

You're probably getting good resonses from female listeners/readers. I'm one of them. I love that you can "act" with your voice. I've done some acting myself (won't go into detail) but I work now as a personal trainer though try to get into TV and film on the side. I think you have lots of talent and your "training" is so hot. I'm a fitness trainer so for me being trained, the exact opposite, is the biggest turn on and thrill. I think you did a great job arousing the listener and wanting more. So give us more please

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

God when he said your protector... Just. AGH <333 Please... Be real one day

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