All Comments on 'Lunch With Laura'

by ccnyman

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Very nice

I would have given it a 5 if he's taken her home and completed the mission.

skip.69skip.69over 16 years ago
Brilliant.

Please tell me where this Food Hall is. I would love to meet Laura, especially if she is so free with her fingers!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Yeah, that was hot..

and believable because she didn't take him home at the end...Still part of me wishes that she did.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Great story

Just another relaxing lunch at the Food Court...

Sounds like it could have been a true story...

Very well written

EroticemailerEroticemailerover 15 years ago
Very Good

I love a good creampie at lunch

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