All Comments on 'Caught in the Storm'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Pretty good

Short, but great build up for a few more good chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Good start. Carry on

Good start. Carry on.

AmyfriendAmyfriendover 16 years ago
Nicely written...

but nothing happened of any great significance. Could this be a chapter 1 in the making? Otherwise it was a nice story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Ummm... OK...

This bit was good, but too short to amount to much. I'd suggest writing more before posting as this is too short to get or keep much attention.

oldwayneoldwayneover 16 years ago
The Question At The End Says It All

I was left wondering the same thing...I believe you have the writing skills to actually tell us the story that you must want to tell. I, at least, hope so...I'll be looking for you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Please Tell Me There Is More

Interesting....That was a very good story, but too short. I really hope you continue this story don't disappoint us...Please continue...More Denver and Mikey

Lynn_MXXLynn_MXXover 10 years ago
Just in case you're wondering

This story is about a White Man and a Black Woman, which takes a long time to establish (in fact confusing for some), if you go straight into the story. It might not be your cup of tea.

ShuckyDuckyShuckyDuckyalmost 10 years ago
I Can't Help Myself...

I've read this series twice already. Added it in my favorites. Added the author in my favorites. This is my third run through. I am just in love with this story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
I love the build up

Favourite. At least one of them. Had to come back to read

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