All Comments on 'Cunt Mouth Whore'

by RawHumor

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Short and nasty

Good short nasty story. You put your reader straight into the fantasy without endless poorly written setup. Wish more short stories of this legth and intensity would be posted.

MarilynmwfMarilynmwfover 16 years ago
Poor pathetic narrator--Maybe some day he will

grow up, become a man and find a real woman

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
SAYS IT ALL

The title of this masterpiece says it all.

Honey123Honey123over 16 years ago
Delicious

Great little story, there Raw...I like the way this girl is yours and will give herself to you completely.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
It's not the size of your word count..

...but what you do with it! Deliciously wanton story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Short and (not) sweet

Straight to the point and right inside my head. Thank you x

MsTexasMsTexasover 16 years ago
Perfection

You should make this an audio, I would love to hear that voice reading this particular story. Excellent!!

FantasySlutFantasySlutover 16 years ago
Scrumptious!

Very, Very, Very hot! Luved it. Made me want to be the *pleaser*. And, I agree, should make it into an audio.

Fellatio LoverFellatio Loverover 16 years ago
Latex Gloves for the Cunt Mouth Whore

I loved your story....conjures up images of being deepthroated to completion. Your Cunt Mouth Whore really needs to wear a pair of opera length latex gloves, not only for the visual effect, but there's nothing like the feeling of saliva coated smooth latex gloves on your erect cock and balls. Trust me, been there done that countless times. You also need a cock ring which will make your erection much larger and also produce a huge explosion of semen down her throat. She would appreciate that.

Sapphire77Sapphire77over 16 years ago
Very hot

I enjoyed it very much, it made me wish I was sucking a cock right now.

I especially loved the part in the end, with the woman looking used and abused, yet loving it.

I can definitely relate to that feeling and it's a great feeling.

BedtimeStories77BedtimeStories77about 16 years ago
A masochist's dream.

RawHumor, as always Your words make me tingle. i love Your imagry and word play. (And though i know i cannot deepthroat quite like that... lol ...i am always lost in a fantasy world that You paint in my mind!)

i also agree with MsTexas. This would make one HOT FUCKING audio story!!! Please?!?!? Do i have to get on my knees to ask? lol

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Eyes aglow

At the end I was was dreaming of looking up at you with my eyes aglow knowing real pleasure. Love the story. Katy

fallingawakefallingawakealmost 15 years ago
Very Nice...

This had just the effect on me it should have...very nice.

miss_bopeepmiss_bopeepabout 14 years ago
New favourite

:-o.... Please?

miss_bopeepmiss_bopeepabout 14 years ago
New favourite

:-o.... Please?

goodgurlgetsbadgoodgurlgetsbadabout 14 years ago
love this story

and I do agree with others- make it into an audio - need help ? *wink*

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Kerist!

Thank you 

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
so hot

love this.

nflgirl81nflgirl81almost 11 years ago
Hot

Such a hot little scene

lisad83lisad83over 10 years ago
That was hot!

Your descriptive writing paints a very clear and erotic scene. Thats exactly how I would like to be treated by a Master with the little reassurances. I think I would have cum the same way she did too. Reading this definitely had an effect on me.

Thank you for writing this,

Lisa

kjgoldkjgoldover 10 years ago
Hot

So Hot to be used like that.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
could be

pretty goood, except the jack off facial, cunt mouths should be pumped full of cum, let them breathe but pump them full of cum!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Me please!

I would love to have you do this to me!

Anonymous
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