All Comments on '157th Street Platform'

I loved the theme of this story! There's nothing quite so thrilling as a strong, sadistic man's hand around one's throat. Nice to know I'm not the only one that feels that way. And thanks for writing as well as you do. Nice to find literate "smut" here ;-)

Pure brilliance and an incredible turn-on. I can't ask for much more than that! This is one of the best submissions (no pun intended) that I've seen in a while. Great work, and please keep it up!

I love the way this is written, the theme and pretty much everything about it, so much so that it prompted me to write my first ever comment !

Great work, would love to read more on the same vein.

At first the whole neck thing was working, but after about paragraph 4 it just got old. Needs some actual sex, not just him pulling her around subway stations and throwing her up against walls and choking her.

I loved this story ....very intimate and personal. I like that it's not overtly sexual or obviously kinky and kitschy. Loved that it's all her, first person perspective. Brilliant!

I have reread this story at least 10 times in the last few weeks. So hot!

Thank you so much.