All Comments on 'Thou Shall Commit Adultery'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Pathetic

The "writer" has no skill and no imagination.

TiggerTooTiggerTooover 16 years ago
Actually, Pathetic was ...

describing the state of his imagination. I thought it was a fun read with a bit of a twist. Thanks for writing. Phil

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
LOL

LOL, I thought it was funny. Thanks for the read

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
you need to get a life

there more constucted things to do in a marriage.what happen when the games don't work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
well written

good story, well written and cute punch line in the end. Keep writing, I think you will be good.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
This is 25 because I liked the humor.

The rest of it really isnt good.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
What was fun?

What is fun about sexualizing a confessional where real people troubled by their weaknesses turn to someone to help them in things ripping their world apart.

God deal with you as He will. There are endless subjects but there are always some no brains who think they can mock God or the people trying to help others in thinking all life is a joke.

I just hope when you hit bottom some clergy doesn't make a joke out of your problems.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Something Different

Something totally different and unexpected. Fun read and quite arousing before the fair. Don't mind the fantasies not the reality that would be coming though.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Cleverly done

Of course non-clever people won't appreciate the nice twist at the end. The erotic parts were very "hardening" as well.

LindaWLindaWover 16 years ago
Ye gods!

There seems to be a lot of people who take life far too seriously. I thought the idea was very erotic and it was nicely written, keeping the twist to the end. Ignore the anonomous knockers - D H Lawrence would be given a hard time in here

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Thanks!

Liked the story, great to see you writing again!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Nice twist at the end!

Didn't spot that one coming ... And where do they hold fairs like that, then?

betrayedbylovebetrayedbyloveover 11 years ago
Stupid

Sexual fantasies in the House of God.

Fuck everybody.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Stupidity runs amok

UGH!

26thNC26thNCover 5 years ago
WTF

Did I just read?

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